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Just curious, is "小心轻放——题记" a subtitle? I like it, a gentle suggestion (no big deal) will be to change the birds to something more breakable at the end to give it a grand finale! 伟哲,你用字越来越熟练了!加油!
Yeah, small subtitle.Just enough to keep the reader keep reading.Noel,你太夸奖了。我还在成长着,需要你耐心的指教呢。
Just curious, is "小心轻放——题记" a subtitle? I like it, a gentle suggestion (no big deal) will be to change the birds to something more breakable at the end to give it a grand finale!
ReplyDelete伟哲,你用字越来越熟练了!加油!
Yeah, small subtitle.Just enough to keep the reader keep reading.
ReplyDeleteNoel,你太夸奖了。我还在成长着,需要你耐心的指教呢。